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It was a sunny day in the beachside Clearwater Town. People were out and about swimming, shopping, playing sports and generally having a good time. Only one person wasn't. His name is Eyan, stuck in his school for holiday detention for pulling a prank on his teacher, he just wanted to get out. His teacher, Miss Snapper, wasn't about to let him go either. "Eyan, have you learnt your lesson yet?" yelled Miss Snapper "No miss. I haven't learnt my lesson yet. But I really want to leave and go to the beach, my friends all want to go to there!" replies Eyan, not happy with his current situation "You can leave, after you have written four hundred lines" snapped the teacher "But, but, but. It's going to be sunset soon and I'll miss out today!" complains Eyan "Too bad. While you sit here and play fiddlies with your thumbs, you can forget about ever getting out of detention until next year" says Miss Snapper in a very demeaning manner "First of all miss, I'm not playing fiddlies with my thumbs, I'm playing Pokèmon Platinum and my Latios has just reached level 79" replies Eyan "Does it look like I care Eyan. You are here for a reason. Not to play your stupid little video games!" mocks Miss Snapper. Suddenly, Miss Snapper receives a phone call about her cat which has just survived surgery on it's leg. "I have to go and pick up my cat. I'll be back in an hour or two. You stay here Eyan, if I return and you aren't here, I swear it will be the last time you are completely human, you hear me!" yells Miss Snapper as she walks out the door. Eyan didn't understand what his teacher meant by 'I swear it will be the last time you are completely human' but still, he opens the classroom window and makes a break for it.

Eyan has just reached his home eager to grab his swimming clothes and head down to the beach. But his house is locked but his mum's car is still there. He runs around to the side of his house and sees his mum swimming in the backyard pool. "Um, mum?" questions Eyan "Eyan, what are you doing here? Shouldn't you be at detention?" asks his mum "Um, ah, Miss Snapper let me leave early" lies Eyan "Hmph, typical. Let me guess, you want to go to the beach?" asks his mum "Yeah, but I can't get inside. For some reason the house is locked" replies Eyan "Oh, damn it, Leonard must have locked the door again. Leonard, unlock the door!" yells Eyan's mum "Oh, sorry mum. I forgot that I locked the door" says Leonard in a very rushed and frustrated tone "Oh hey Eyan!" "Hi Leonard. Why aren't you swimming or out and about?" asks Eyan "It's so hot outside, besides I can spend at least three more hours playing Super Smash Bros Brawl until Dad gets home and takes over the TV" answers Leonard. Eyan walks to his room and removes his stinky and sweaty jeans, shirt and joggers in place of cool swimming shorts and flip-flops. Eyan then hurriedly leaves the house and heads straight for the beach.

The beach has calmed down more and only a few people are in the same area that Eyan is in. Also at the beach is Eyan's best friend Ashlee who only just notices him. "Eyan, Eyan, Eyan. I'm so glad you could make it here!" screams Ashlee who gives him a great big hug "Yeah, yeah, yeah, I get it Ashlee you're happy to see me!" exclaims Eyan "Oh, sorry, um hi" apologises Ashlee "Why are you saying sorry? I kinda liked the hug" asks Eyan "Oh okay. Sorry" says Ashlee "You know you're a little weird, my best friend but weird, in a good way" explains Eyan. Ashlee laughs and the two go into the water and happily play together.

Unbeknownst to Eyan, Miss Snapper has finished her search for him. She gets out off her big black sedan and spots him in the water. "Hmm, you seriously think you can hide from me boy. You should have listened when I told you that you will never be human again if you leave the classroom" Miss Snapper thinks to herself as her hand begins glowing an evil blue light, then she throws the 'light' at Eyan. Eyan feels the impact of the blast and is thrown into the water, though he thought it was just the waves hitting him. "Whoa Eyan are you okay?!" yells Ashlee, concerned "What the. That must have been some big wave" replies Eyan "Um, no, there wasn't any wave. Maybe a small one that was barely higher than your knees" explains Ashlee "Then what was it…ooh, I'm feeling really light-headed. I say…we call…it a…day" says Eyan "Um, are you okay?" asks Ashlee "No, I think I might go home and sleep. Can you call mum?" responses Eyan "Sure (rings phone). Um, Eyan's mum, it's Ashlee. We're at the beach and Eyan is feeling way too light-headed to walk home, can you come and pick us up?" asks Ashlee "Sure, I'll be there in five minutes" answers Eyan's mum.

Eyan's mum picks up Eyan and Ashlee from the beach and drives them to Eyan's family home. As soon as the car stops, Eyan runs straight for the pool. "What happened to him?" asks Eyan's mum "I don't know, we were swimming and splashing each other with water when suddenly he was flung ten metres from where we were" replies Ashlee "Must have hurt!" says Eyan's mum "The thing is, nothing hit him, it was all just sudden" says Ashlee "Hey, look, how 'bout you go inside and make him some dinner and I'll watch him" "Okay, I'm sure he's very hungry" agrees Eyan's mum.

Eyan sits calmly in the pool, ready to get up when he feels a pain in his right arm. "Argh! Argh! What the heck is that pain?" then Eyan notices something, his arm is changing form and causing him intense pain in the process. "Ah! What the…my arm…it looks just like Latios' arm. Argh! Uh! Urgh! How the…now my other arm…holy crap, I'm turning into a Latios. Ashlee, help me" yells Eyan, but Ashlee is just too shocked to do anything about it, she just sits there watching her best friend transform. Now Eyan's body begins to transform and he gains a slight boost in height "Ah! Stupid thing, now I can't even get out of the pool. What! Wings, ugh!" now Eyan is doubling over in pain, until his legs start to change form, basically disappearing and forming the ridge-shaped features that Latios has on his rear. For a moment Eyan's transformation stopped "What! Are you kidding me, the transformation stops now and my head is still human!" he yells but then his neck grows longer and his head starts changing "Argh! How, what…my eyes…my nose, urgh! My ears" Eyan screams but now he has become a full Latios, sitting in his pool and his whole family staring at him. Eyan tries to speak but can only think "Great! I've become a Latios, my most favourite Pokèmon in the world and I can't even speak. Perfect!". Eyan's mum stands there and tries to chase Eyan off, thinking that a monster has taken over and killed him but he accidentally knocks her into the pool. Sad and confused, Eyan flies away.

A few hours later and Eyan is sitting on top of a cliff thinking to himself "How, how is it possible for me to transform into a Latios. As much as I like Latios I never wanted to actually be one. I just need to find out how this happened, the moment I began feeling light-headed, I was at the beach with Ashlee when something had hit me. Wait, wait a minute. I got it, Miss Snapper, she said if I leave the classroom it will be the last time I'm completely human. It was her all along, she's the reason I'm a Latios. I must find her!". Eyan then leaps into the air and flies towards the school, having the slightest feeling that Miss Snapper is there. At the school, Eyan notices Miss Snapper walking to her car and he swoops down and picks her up with his arms. "Ah! Ah! Let me go! Wait, Eyan is that you? Hehehe" screams Miss Snapper "I never thought that my burst of magic would turn you into a Latios, I wanted you to become a zombie". Eyan uses a telepathic power to tell Miss Snapper that he is taking revenge, and so takes her to a junk barge in the middle of the ocean and dumps her there. Interestingly, Miss Snapper's 'powers' are weakened by disgusting smells. "I'll get you for this Eyan. I will make you pay for what you have done" angrily screams Miss Snapper to which Eyan via telepathy says "My name is Eyan no more, I am Latios!". Latios flies off into the night, making his way back to his hometown and now overjoyed with his new form.

Latios returns to his house where everyone is asleep, except for Ashlee, who has been waiting for him to return since he flew away. Then, out of nowhere, Latios glides down and floats near Ashlee. "Eyan! Can you tell me what you are going to do?" asks Ashlee, Latios then telepathically tells her "There is nothing here for me anymore, except you, but I don't want you to give away your life just for me. You have a life. I have my new one, I must follow my destiny and live like the Latios I am. Maybe one day I'll find someone who has an unfortunate Pokèmon transformation like mine, but until then, goodbye" Latios flies away, leaving the town he was born, raised, 'died' and 'reborn' in.

That is the story of Eyan, the young teen from Clearwater Town who was unfortunate to have been transformed into a Latios by a woman with great power, and then grew to love his newer form. No one knows for sure where he ended up, but the possibility of him ending up in the same reality where a girl by the name of Katie who turned into a Piplup woke up in shortly after her transformation is the best bet.
This is the first thing I've done that was requested by another person, so here's hoping I did good.
It was requested by :iconlationthelatios:

Eyan character belongs to LationTheLatios.
Story and other characters belong to me.
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Gregmastifier007 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012
nice story read it sevearl times new member to this site but have read some stories mind if i watch you.
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lonefox95 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You dont need to ask me if u can watc me
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Gregmastifier007 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012
ok man
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Gregmastifier007 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012
nice story read it sevearl times new member to this site but have read some stories mind if i watch you.
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Gregmastifier007 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012
nice story read it sevearl times new member to this site but have read some stories mind if i watch you.
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NanoCarp0 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm gonna be honest. This one was sloppy. Very sloppy. You're missing some of the most basic writing conventions, such as starting a new paragraph when the speaker in dialogue changes. Grammar is rather inconsistent, and very little in the story even remotely makes sense. The TF itself is VERY rushed, and there is a sudden personality change after the TF. The random reference to another story at the end is also VERY out of place. Please work a bit harder in the future, as I see potential here.

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lonefox95 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, thank you again for being honest. Yeah this was one of the first TF stories I submitted to dA and my recent TF stories have decent writing conventions (paragraphing, decent grammar, etc). Sorry for the almost month late reply.
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llirbwerdnadivad Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012
T_T How could he leave Ashlee like that? For all he knows, she might want to giver her life away for him...
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lonefox95 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Read the sequel
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llirbwerdnadivad Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
I did, but still...
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